My Soul is a Butterfly.

Header image by Andrew Dubongco, my friend with artistic superpowers.

Saturday, January 16, 2010

Visitors in my bedroom.


This post is NSFP (Not safe for prudes.) 


Scotch and Suitcases


The air was dim and tasted like whiskey. I hadn’t slept well since his plane arrived and was pulling energy from the emptiness in my stomach. Raw intensity, from my veins. I wondered if it was morning yet.







I pinned him down and hovered above him, our eyes adjusting to the flickering light. He traced my collar bone and the seam of my dress. The path down the curve of my hips.

He grabbed my hair and pulled. “Come closer.”

“No.”

I watched his eyes sear into me, asking questions, wide and blue. I checked the clock. 5 a.m. I climbed off the bed.

My body seemed to know what it was doing without informing my mind. I pulled the bottom drawer of my dresser off its hinges. The sound was louder than I anticipated.

“Hannah…?”

“Stay.”

I carried the drawer into my office and slammed the door. Dumped the contents on the floor. Fragments of costumes, the past in bows and lace. I slid off my dress and readjusted my stockings. I laced up a silk corset.

When I returned to the bedroom, he was still on his back, hands above his head as if bound. He smiled. “Get  over here.”

 I stood back, snapping a photograph with my mind, blending the angles with brushstrokes. He was beautiful.


“Hannah…”

I climbed on top of him and grabbed his hair in bunches, bit his lower lip. Fingertips, fingernails. Breath. He ran his hands over the silk, cleavage, back to silk. I kissed him hard, the way you kiss someone who is flying home in the morning. Someone you will miss the most in this way, on his back. Someone you will miss most when you're thirsty.

He unhooked the top of my corset. I slapped him across the face.

“You such crazy girl.” His English slipped. Victory. I slapped him again.

His eyes sparked flames and he broke free of my arms, unleashing his pent up strength. He flipped me onto my stomach and held me down. Ran his hands softly over my ass. “You like this...” he said. He spanked me. “…crazy girl.”

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The painting in this post is by Jack Vettriano, via the delightfully devious Mr. Condescending.  If you crave more lust, Mr.C is running an ongoing 100 word competition. I can't tell you which is mine. You should also check out Adulterous Ellie. She's hauntingly sexy. In both words and reality.

46 comments:

Langley said...

Hannah's being a naughty girl as most people would say. But I say that you're being a good girl and being very good with what you're doing.

I miss nights/days like that. One day.

inflammatory writ said...

Spanking = hot. Funnily enough, the play I'm writing right now involves a fair amount of spanking. And paper birds. And general weirdness that my brain spews out.

JeffScape said...

Very nice. Subdued, yet overt.

And I'm also a huge fan of Vettriano. Can't claim to own any prints, but I've got his coffee table book.

That Gal Kiki said...

Perfect descriptor for a beautiful paiting

Someone Said said...

That's a sexy piece of writing.

Hovito89 said...

There's not much to say about this piece.. There is- but there really isn't.. Perfect.

I would soo buy tickets to the premier of that play..

Seyma said...

wow!! this is something to hear.. very bold and beautiful..

love.

tinkerbell the bipolar faerie said...

Fabulous. You. Definitely. Have. A. Way. With. Words.

Eva O'Dell said...

That was dirty, and incredibly tantalizing. Great work. I enjoy you blog, it speaks of truth not many others are willing to unleash. I admire your writing and look forward to every new piece.

G.~ said...

Fabulous dahling.
Makes me want those days back.
I forgot I'm actually very sensual. This reminds me...Thank you.

birdykins said...

Slapping the English out of him. That's actually my favourite part. Though, I have a feeling you could do this with even just a look or a word. You seem to do it to me often enough.

JenJen said...

Hannah
Jack is one of my favorite artists, and a painting of his inspired something I wrote but have been too nervous to post on my blog.
I loved this.

Ellie said...

My iphone ate my first comment, but I called to say...
Thank you. This was worth waking up on Sunday morning for. Sex, power, silk. Brilliant.
You're right. Two of us? We'd enslave the city, not just rule it.
I do hope the corset was (a) scarlet and (b) tight enough. I always have to get someone else to finish me off.
Finally, if you were here I'd make sure to show my gratitude... thoroughly. Yes.

justsomethoughts... said...

The way you kiss someone flying home in the morning

Perfect

bex said...

Amazingly sexy. I love Vettriano. Also amazingly sexy.

katieleigh said...

sexy, sexy, sexy

*uncorked said...

Hot. Now I feel a bit naughty on a Sunday morning. Love.

spit said...

it's easy to pick out your words; the best ones. you've got my vote.

The Urban Cowboy said...

Naughty AND nice!

P.T said...

Wow! I'm blown away...I was reading this and forgot to breathe for a minute!!
Phewww...

omchelsea said...

Very nice.

Grant said...

I am inspired. I will be posting my own sexy story tomorrow.

Rider said...

There was no ocean-going ship, no flowers in her hair, and no landscape of blue. With only a silk corset, stockings, and her imagination, she kindled his passion. Then she blessed him as only mortal woman can.

"Visitor" was a very lucky guy.

Hannah Miet said...

@Someone Said, @Seyma @Tinkerbell @Just some thoughts @Bex @Kaitleigh @uncorked @The Urban Cowboy @PT @Omchelsea-Thank you for the lovely compliments I am currently sipping in bed.

@Langely - I try to be good, at least at being bad.

@Inflammatory Writ - There is no way I won't come to see this play.

@Jeffscape - There is passion, unhinging, but also restraint. He blows me away.

@Spit - That makes me so happy. A lot of my friends did not vote for me, but I have a feeling you nailed it...

@

@That Gal Kiki - In regards to your question on Twitter: Yes, I think blogging is writing.

A blogger is a writer, even if they aren't necessarily defined by the term. Those of us who write and edit professionally as well as blog in our personal time often exist entirely within a world of worlds. The real world, even, is filled with landscapes of letters. This is what separates a blogger who writes from a "writer."

@Hovito - I will hold you to this. Though I think the play would be best performed in burlesque at The Slipper Room, personally. Tickets would be free. You'd just have to buy a martini.

@Eva O' Dell - Your comments always make me feel like a million bucks.

@G - You can be sensual all the time...even alone...

@Birdykins - Even though you do the same to me, I can only imagine that our words combined would built sand castles up to the sky. There would be no end.

@Jen - I am intrigued. Please post it...

@Ellie - I have been holding off reading your post all day. I briefly glanced at it this morning, but tucked it away since it looked like something I wanted to sit and sip with. Especially as someone who languishes the pleasure of being a stranger, alone at the bar...

Your words await...

@Grant - Can't wait.

@Rider - I am slowly but surely falling for your comments. I would love to read your own words, but your profile leads me only to wonder.

Mr. Condescending said...

You could write a story to accompany any vettriano.

I so want to run my hand over a girls ass right now, thanks. I sleep the best with my hand firmly planted on a lovers butt cheek.

sweetmagnoliya said...

You paint a detailed picture of sensuality. I feel like I am reading about myself. Nicely done, Suzie Q

jules said...

Good sex always happens at 5am! Great story. I really liked this!

Rider said...

Why should I write for anyone but you, Hannah?

Hannah Miet said...

@MrCondescending - Should I do a series?

My 100 word was somewhat based on the painting that's first on your blog. That one is my absolute favorite.

I have accepted the fact that I posted the link to the contest on Facebook and that many of my close friends, trying to figure our which one is mine, did not vote for me. Or at least, I am pretending to accept this.

@sweetmagnolyia - Thank you, lovely.

@Rider - ....swoon.

Grant said...

I posted my own little pervy story. I don't know how long I am gonna keep it posted up. I have friends and family that read my shit. Good luck on the contest.

Hipstercrite said...

WHOA!
You are really good at this. Write more!
Or better yet, write a book!

Hipstercrite said...

actually, this post made me feel very lonely

Hannah Miet said...

@Austin Great read.

@Hipstercrite I don't want to make you feel lonely. I would rather cuddle.

And thank you.

.:Lady Lise:. said...

YummY! me likey!

ashley said...

titillatingly beautiful, not unlike the author. ;)

That Chelsea Girl™ said...

It's like personal moment I feel I shouldn't know about you but things I can still relate to. Take care!

Escher Dashiki said...

"Someone you will miss the most in this way, on his back."

The lust is the hardest part to leave behind. GODDAMNIT.

lovely work mlle.

Brow Raised Beauty said...

Oh your writing is delicious! Please don't stop

Thank you, I really needed to read this after the day I've had:) Rain, rain go away...

golublog said...

That was all kinds of awesome.

Lola Lakely said...

I hate having a life outside of blogging. It makes me all these delicious posts. "I kissed him hard, the way you kiss someone who is flying home in the morning. Someone you will miss the most in this way, on his back. Someone you will miss most when you're thirsty." I adore that line. Hannah, my love, I have missed you.

eichinger georg said...

what's up with you, tired butterfly? some one over the ocean in berlin is waiting for your explanation of the infinit misteries of life&death as a little sun througout this orrible could winterdays.
george

Hannah Miet said...

@Lady @Ashley - Donke.

@That Chelsea Girl - You feel you shouldn't know...? Tell me more.

@Escher - Aint' that the truth sometimes.

@Brow Raised Beauty - I hope your rain went away.

@Golublog - You are all kinds of awesome.

@Lola - So the rest of us do not have lives outside of writing? What would we write about?

Excuses, Lola. Excuses.

I still think you're beautiful.

@eicher - I will post today, though I am afraid my infinite wisdom is quite limited. The sunshine...maybe I can provide a drop of that. But I make no promises I can't keep.

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j said...

youre hot. hot hannah.

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Oh yeaaah. I like that...